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The Scented Garden
The Scented Garden (1910), PDF p. 113
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Ecstasy stronger than Death.
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1. Death in the East rides a camel, not a white
horse.
2. Bedawin — any wanderers. But the home-
less necessarily live by robbery. Hence the para-
doxes of Socialism.
3. Lit. sharp as [Persian text] zu’l faqar, the
sword of Mohammed which he captured on the
field of Badr. A sort of Eastern Excalibur, by the
usual mythopoetic process.
4. I confess to fantastic license in translation of
this curious passage. But some of the words are
not Persian or anything else, and two or three
seemed me formed in this manner. For example, I
have translated [Persian text] “ Allah knows ” rea-
sonably enough ; and [Persian text] Shayadistan,
Perhaps — country, is well for “ maybe ”, while
[Persian text] “ happy memory ” justifies “ Sweetit-
was.” But what shall I say of [Persian text] and the
rest — mangled though suggestive roots ? Possibly
the poet knew very little about ships and their
name.
5. Jolly Roger — again a coarse expression, best
untranslated. The notorious debauchery of pirate
ships, and the slang verb “ Roger ” (futuere]) sug-
gested the present phrase.
6. The text would justify us in reading “ rounded
pearls ” [Persian text] fairy (peri of Moore) and [Per-
sian text] fullness. Where there was doubt, we
have chosen what seemed the more poetical read-
ing.
7. Some M.S. end with this Takhallus. See note
2.
8. This and the following stanzas seem inconse-
quent. But they contain profound allusions. The
thousand eyes of the peacock’s tail are equivalent
to the thousand petals of the Sahasrara lotus in
India ; the divine lotus that only exists as a throne
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